Assignment 3: Q2

In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” Pattern. Based on what we discussed in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating “plain English writing for the web” in the “F” Pattern including visuals. You are to include your revised version if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern. Ensure that it addresses the three main objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hard copy. (12 marks)

Original post from Assignment 1 that does not follow the F-Pattern:

Looking back, obviously, no one on the web would want to read this.

New introductory post following the F-Pattern & plain language:

Furnisure: A New Take on Custom Furniture and Restoration

Furnisure offers locally made, custom furniture and restoration services right here in Windsor.  Whether you are looking for a new kitchen table to match your modern space or you just need to freshen up your old rocking chair, Furnisure is here to help!

When it comes to furniture, not everyone wants to take the one-size-fits-all approach. You and your home have a unique style, and you deserve a product that reflects this. This is why Furnisure includes you in every step of the way to make your vision become a reality.


Furnisure’s 5 Step Process for made-to-order furniture

All you need to do is:

  • Book your consultation to meet with a designer. You will discuss details such as dimensions, materials, and colour.
  • Get updates every step of the way.
  • Sit back and wait for our free delivery service to bring you your masterpiece.

Furniture and interior design go hand-in-hand to make your home a unique space. This is why Furnisure combines craftsmanship with design to give clients exactly what they’re looking for.

Book a consultation today so you can stop browsing and start creating.


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    Thank you for your help and this post. It’s been great.

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